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Through the darkness

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Dolphins3
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0 posted 09-30-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dolphins3

The darkness of the midnight sky
As I look up at all the stars
As far as I can see
The quietness of the night sky
Peace invades my soul
Welcoming the feeling
The quieting hush of the breeze blowing
through the trees
Listening to the waves gentle lapping
at the shore
Knowing this will be never more
Because with the sun
Comes the choas
That has just begun
Waiting for the darkness once again
© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-01-1999 07:43 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I love the sea, can stand lost in thought for ages, seaspray on my face, watching the waves undulating..I wish..

HUGS

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mia
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2 posted 10-01-1999 07:51 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I really loved it. I love the ocean...just came back from four months at sea...in the sea...drowning. And it is so true that with the sun comes chaos... You are a really great poet...I would love to read more

m
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3 posted 10-01-1999 08:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely!

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4 posted 10-01-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

this is a very beautiful piece, leaves me with a sense of lonliness and heart ache.

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I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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5 posted 10-02-1999 02:06 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

With the day comes the chaos indeed!
Well written!
It likes me as I like it!
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6 posted 10-02-1999 02:27 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done!!! I've always thought I do my best thinking if I can hear the rhythm of the waves.
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7 posted 10-02-1999 07:02 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! This is the first poem I've read of yours and I must say, I like it a lot. The sea has always fascinated me..I love to just sit and watch it!
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