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Mike
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0 posted 09-30-1999 12:12 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Memories flow as ocean's tide,
As I recall the day love died,
Looking through a mist of tears,
Reflecting on too few the years.

I feel the pain of loneliness,
And fear the lance of neverness,
To nevermore touch on the skies,
As I gaze into your eyes.

To never touch your silken hair,
Nor tender kiss, our love to share,
Two lives as one, was meant to be,
Now one is gone, pain's misery.

No spoken work shall heal the pain,
For what is gone, shall not regain,
For I have lost what was to be,
All that remains, love's memory.
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-01-1999 11:31 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Mike, not sure why no one posted to this, but I thought it so hauntingly beautiful and sad I had to bump it back to the top

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2 posted 10-01-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Superb! Your words sing in each lovely, sad line!
Pepper
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3 posted 10-02-1999 01:53 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Mike...you have captured so beautifully,the harsh pain of a love that died......I have wondered if love dies, why does it still hurt so .......really liked this read......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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4 posted 10-02-1999 06:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, Mike. I particularly love the line 'And fear the lance of neverness'.

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Denise
 
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