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Dark Angel
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0 posted 10-01-1999 05:10 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

"Bald Hill"


Where am I, On this deserted cliff edge
Where the night's not clear, yet, very clear
Taking in the beauty, I rest upon the sand wedge
Feeling bizzare, but surprisingly not feeling any fear

A breeze caresses my face as it blows
The night air calm with a sense of magic
The mystic moon overwhelms me as it glows
Not to have experienced this would be so tragic

The dark clouds forming such beautiful figures
Finally breaking and passing slowly by the moon
In awe as I watch such a sight, my mind it triggers
This night, this sky, this moment, a time most opportune

This place, an eerie feeling about the night
As she shines brightly upon calm waters below
La Luna, Oh how she beckons me to take full flight
As I am seduced, by her surrounding halo of golden glow

Excitement takes over as I feel a sudden chill
I want to visit here again, this place they call, Bald Hill.


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-01-1999 05:14 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My dear, the formatting alone you worked wonders with. I have seen that same moon from many places. She is indeed lovely.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
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2 posted 10-01-1999 05:33 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Dark Angel this is gorgeous! Well-crafted and beautifully written.

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Dark Angel
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Soul-Brother, thank you so much for your lovley comment, And thanks for the advice, much appreciated

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dark Angel
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Caroline, thank you so much for your lovley comment

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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5 posted 10-01-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Enchanting D.A! Very well done, felt as if I was there!
Dark Angel
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WhtDove, thank you Hon, I appreciate your comment

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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A very nice read....wonderful imagery in this piece. I loved these lines:
"La Luna, Oh how she beckons me to take full flight
As I am seduced, by her surrounding halo of golden glow"


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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
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8 posted 10-01-1999 06:30 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

I like this one...I could feel everything you were saying. Nice!
Dark Angel
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Hoot, Thank you for your lovley comment, I appreciate it

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Pufalove, Thanking you muchly for your lovley comment

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Great poem DA, was beautiful - I really felt like I was there. I can just imagine the moonshine on the water.
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thanks for taking me to such a beautiful place DA........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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I can almost feel the breeze....lovely poem!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Dark Angel
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Moonshine,I'm sure you can, it was breathtaking Thanks for your lovley comment.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




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Dark Angel
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Pepper, anytime !! thanks for your lovely comment.
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Dragoness, thanks so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Very lovely enchanting piece!

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A lovely poem DA! I needed this quiet, dark time on Bald Hill. Thank you.
Dark Angel
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17 posted 10-03-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Denise, thanks so much for your lovely comment

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PDV,Thanks so much and you are most welcome

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Dark Angel,
You sang well the song of the moon
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Dark Angel, I love the imagery...you have done well here my dear!!

Jenny
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Seymour and JennyLee, thanks so much, your comments always mean so much.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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