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legend of love

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jesus
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0 posted 09-15-99 02:20 AM       View Profile for jesus   Email jesus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jesus

legend says that long ago
all people had two heads
and four legs until the gods
threw down lighting bolts
splitting the people
they then had two legs and one head
only it left htem with half a soul
leaving them yearning for the other half
now we search our entire lives hoping
that one day to find the other half
i have stopped my searching
for i believe that the other half
of my soul lies deep within
the body of a beautiful woman
a woman with eyes of the gods
and the heart of a giant
never before have i felt
as whole a i do in her arms
i pray that the gods never again
decide to throw down their lighing bolts
because without her
i'd never be the same again
-jesus

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juanita
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1 posted 09-15-99 05:31 AM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

VERY ROMANTIC, JESUS.
Sunshine
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2 posted 09-29-1999 05:46 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is quite lovely, and I like legend part of it.
Pepper
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jesus I too like the legend..quite unique....thanks for the read

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Mystic Essence
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Deeply romantic....I enjoyed this very much.

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~ Althea Willow, 1999~
jesus
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5 posted 09-30-1999 01:09 PM       View Profile for jesus   Email jesus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jesus

i thank you all. romance today is lost and i
am lost in it.

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