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Heart adrift

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 09-30-1999 09:12 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

My heart dreamt of magic last night
swimming with dolphins in oceans below
flying along on velvety clouds
walking where the flowers grow

Beautiful colours lighting my way
rainbow resplendent in various hues
I found a land of peaceful dreams
where I lay kissed by morning dew

On I flew through day and night
images playing serenely in my mind
guided by stars shining so bright
seeking what I couldn't find

On wings of hope we carried on
angels guiding as night turned to light
and there in the early rising dawn
- my lover with candle burning bright..

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-30-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 09-30-1999 09:22 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

And his candle was lit for you,
Because of all the things you do,
And you're like so very few,
One in a million, this candle for you!
But before you decide to go,
Remember the candle was lit by Toe!

Very nice poem Brit....

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RainbowGirl
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2 posted 09-30-1999 09:28 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Darling: Trust you...I'm sat here with tears in my eyes, when this mail arrives and now I'm laughing so much I'm travelling on wind..ROFLMAO

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Toerag
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3 posted 09-30-1999 09:36 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yanno dearie....old Balladeer "travels on wind" too.....we won't discuss where it came from however...I gotta go teach a class, as usual, I'm late.....see ya
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4 posted 09-30-1999 09:52 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I can't write a poetic response as fine as Toe's... but I'll echo him in complimenting a poem well done!

And ROFLMAO at traveling on wind!!! *G*
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5 posted 09-30-1999 09:59 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Beautiful poem RG ... and I see that Toe is still full of hot air ... LOL

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beautiful
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 09-30-1999 01:20 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Bless you all for your comments and laughter..*g*

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

hoot_owl_rn
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Rainbow.....beautiful imagery, I really enjoyed this piece, thanks for the read

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Pepper
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9 posted 10-02-1999 02:33 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

magical Rainbow....I've just read it three times in a row.....I love the way it makes me feel.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Christopher
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10 posted 10-02-1999 02:15 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Another hert-felt triumph RG!
"where I lay kissed by morning dew"

Don't you think that was supposed to be:

"where I lay drinking my mountain dew?"


LOL
HUGS
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11 posted 10-02-1999 06:04 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Once again....I am changing my name to Mountain Dew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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12 posted 10-02-1999 06:36 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing
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13 posted 10-02-1999 10:53 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

wow, this is very good..........you are very good.........glad to be your friend. (can I keep this one)

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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