I liked the beginning and the end but you lost me somewhere in the middle. I grasp the concept you are protraying. The flow or the feeling wasn't as strong. Just my opinion. I am NO expert. By the way....I was looking in CA and you were refered to a milady. Is the handle purposely deceiving?
Balladeer, Always glad for a comment from you. Marilyn, Thank you for the read and comments, but I don't understand your CA reference and the milady remark? Pepper, You are a sweet and faithful reader, thank you.
san diego, ca.