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H. Arlequin
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0 posted 1999-10-01 02:27 AM


Ode to Soaring

While we shackle soles to this sorry sod,
our spirits should clamor to soar in space,
with freedom designed by a loving God,
mortal and Immortal assent in embrace.
Ethereal harmonics will herald the roll,
receptive adherents given charge, "Keep
melodious resonance, regaling the soul,
the prelusive glissade to passion's grand leap!"

Mid-morning breezes, warmed by the sun,
uplift all that flies, to drift on high
toward altocumulus palisades, soft spun
to engulf the mind and delight the eye
in soaring thermal perspective; to know,
embracing love's high-flying point of view,
less urgent the things obscured below
for here my thoughts want only, you.

--H. Arlequin
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Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm


[This message has been edited by H. Arlequin (edited 10-02-1999).]

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-01 07:17 AM


Wow! This is fantastic! Truly a higher perspective!

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Denise

H. Arlequin
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2 posted 1999-10-01 08:44 PM


smooooooooooooooches Denise!!

HA

Artur Hawkwing
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3 posted 1999-10-01 08:59 PM


Fantasic to read, please keep posting more! Where do you learn your words?
caroline
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4 posted 1999-10-01 10:20 PM


H. your poetry is always fantastic !!

This one has that soaring feeling to it...loved it!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

H. Arlequin
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5 posted 1999-10-02 03:09 AM


Hi artur and caroline!!

ty for the kind words, :-)))
that leave the heart smiling...
excelsior,


HA

Nan
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6 posted 1999-10-03 12:18 PM


In a word - MELLIFLUENT!!
Beki
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7 posted 1999-10-03 04:27 PM


This is one of those poems of yours that loses me in the language...but I love the message!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

[This message has been edited by Beki (edited 10-03-1999).]

Alwye
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8 posted 1999-10-03 04:29 PM


Wow!! Had to look up a few words, but thats a good thing!! I love it.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



snow in summer
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9 posted 1999-10-04 08:06 PM


really enjoyed this HA!
Denise
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10 posted 1999-10-24 12:50 PM




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Denise

Watcher666
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11 posted 1999-10-24 12:53 PM


How did I miss this?? Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 1999-10-24 12:02 PM


Where has this one been hiding out...wonderful!!
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