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Devil in the Raw

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Julie
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0 posted 10-01-1999 02:15 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Julie

Not a real life story...

Devil in the Raw

Shaming heavens abroad

Your essence is a fraud.

Callous accusations

Sends multiplying sensations.

Uncurable endeavors

Fellowship severs.

Possessions your gratuity,

Confusion guarantees annuity.

Consequesnces of dishonorable nature

Co-facilitates consummation of procedure.

Fawning to savor your audience;

Narcissistic conscience,

of desirous negation, tripling-double jeopardy;
Seeking the soul that will be your property.


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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



© Copyright 1999 Julie - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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1 posted 10-01-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I know this Devil...good work!

Jenny
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2 posted 10-02-1999 10:31 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

WOW......Julie this is very good.....like the theme and the title really draws one in.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Julie
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3 posted 10-02-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you Jennylee and Pepper. I really
appreciate you words.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 10-03-1999 01:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Julie,
Enjoyed the read.
Denise
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5 posted 10-03-1999 04:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, Julie!

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Denise
Julie
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Thanks Denise and Seymour...glad you enjoyed
it.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



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