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Lucie
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0 posted 10-01-1999 12:32 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I gazed into the darkened sky
and wished upon a star.
That you might feel the love I send
no matter where you are.

I dropped a penny in a well
and closed my eyes up tight.
Hoping that you feel my love
surrounding you at night.

I know the distance seems so great
the miles stretch between.
And though I canít be there with you
donít be afraid to lean.

You see my love my strength is yours
and I will carry you.
When you feel frightened and alone
and donít know what to do.

I know that were it possible
youíd be right here with me.
But God in heaven has a plan
that only he can see.

So when your feeling lonely
and I seem to be so far.
Look into the sky my love
and wish upon "our" star.


[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 10-01-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 10-01-1999 12:45 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wonderful poem, Lucie.
I needed a message of hope right now. This is beautiful.

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Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP



Isis
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2 posted 10-01-1999 01:21 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So beautiful Lucie, it touched something, somewhere inside of me. And I think that is the biggest compliment you could get!
Thankyou!!!

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~

DreamEvil
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3 posted 10-01-1999 02:53 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Your everpresent humor and joy are indeed a comfort to us all dear Lady.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

WhtDove
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4 posted 10-01-1999 10:24 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Simply loved it! WOW!!!
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5 posted 10-01-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Very well done, Lucie!
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6 posted 10-01-1999 11:18 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Like I said, on your serious side, you are untouchable. Good work, Lucie.
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7 posted 10-01-1999 03:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Something I wish I'd written.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Blue Eyed Wanderer
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8 posted 10-01-1999 03:25 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

This was great. Nice job!

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Anytime you try to win everything, you must be willing to lose everything. -Larry Csonka

*~Jessica~*
Toerag
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9 posted 10-01-1999 03:27 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Lucie...you're so talented in so many different ways....Humor, serious, love, erotica....Now then.....not saying that humor, serious and love are anything to be taken lightly....but just what are you doing this evening....say, about one a.m.?
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 10-01-1999 04:26 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Lucie: There's surely a star shining on you..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Pepper
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11 posted 10-01-1999 04:34 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

so very beautiful Lucie....like Isis this piece touched me too......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Lucie
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12 posted 10-01-1999 04:39 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Toe.. I'd take you up on that offer, but suthern's got that bat and all.. so.. sorry.. your on your own bud..heheh

Thank you all for your replies!
hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 10-01-1999 05:22 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lucie....this is excellent, and one I can definately relate to right now

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Pufalove
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14 posted 10-01-1999 06:01 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

uhmmmm...another home run. This one hit home for a lot of people. I know "one" in particular who I could send it to. Do you?
As usual, captivating and touches ya "right there"!
Dark Angel
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15 posted 10-01-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lucie, this is really beautiful, well done!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


johnt300
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16 posted 10-02-1999 05:20 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Wonderful, Lucie. This sounds like a familiar situation that I know of all too well. Couldn't have said it better. Nice job!
Tyson
Nan
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17 posted 10-03-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...Two thumbs up...
Denise
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18 posted 10-03-1999 04:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply beautiful!

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Denise
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