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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-09-30 09:50 PM


Acceptance


The immense state of being
free
from feeling
lost
finding out that all is
calm
and everything is as it should
be
for now and tomorrow
life
revolves around the
center
of this fantastic circle
rotating
on the axis of
self.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-30 10:24 PM


Nicely done!

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Denise

Severn
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2 posted 1999-10-01 01:27 AM


Like the structure, this flows very well.
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
3 posted 1999-11-06 07:16 PM


I liked this
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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4 posted 1999-11-06 07:26 PM


Another good'n it is! Self...so true!
RobertB
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5 posted 1999-11-06 07:32 PM


Thanks Lost....you are digging in to my past posts!!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-11-06 09:18 PM


Well, I'm glad she did. Excellent form.
Watcher666
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7 posted 1999-11-06 11:06 PM


Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-04-25 08:47 PM


and this...I needed
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