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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 09-30-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Rainbow hued droplets gently spiral earthbound,
Floating softly upon the vividly glittered breeze.
My mind is silent and I deeply cherish the sound,
Mild calmness quieting my tempest wrought seas.

Leaves of hunter colored velvet, silken to touch,
Carefully woven into a vivid tapestry of life.
I never knew heavenly starlight shined this much,
I never knew a thought could destroy all strife.

Creamy mists of white hover upon the silver grass,
The icy beauty shining within your sparkled eyes.
Our love brushes life upon this land so vast,
Flooding the brightened, gleaming sapphire skies.

Forever is ours for the taking upon this horizon,
Eternity is here, within the embrace of your arms.
The fire of our passion rages like the morning sun,
And when I wake from dreams, you shall keep me from harm.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 09-30-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Twas Beautiful Alwye!
Mystic Essence
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2 posted 09-30-1999 10:18 PM       View Profile for Mystic Essence   Email Mystic Essence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic Essence

Krista, this is a great piece of work. I know the feelings you felt when you wrote this, thats for sure. Exellent, my friend.

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~
Denise
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3 posted 09-30-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Krista!

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Denise
Alwye
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4 posted 09-30-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you very much.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


RainbowGirl
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5 posted 10-01-1999 04:25 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Alwye: Beautifully written..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Mystic Essence
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6 posted 10-01-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for Mystic Essence   Email Mystic Essence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic Essence

Love this, Alwye..

[This message has been edited by Mystic Essence (edited 10-01-1999).]
Alwye
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Thank you both.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Artur Hawkwing
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8 posted 10-01-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Krista, there is so much to be gained through reading your poems... I think that you have quite a flair (and also, knack) for words.

Twas was great!
Alwye
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Thank you very much, my friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


DreamEvil
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10 posted 10-01-1999 09:17 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil



Not much else to say my friend. Rocking as always, Alwye.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

caroline
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11 posted 10-01-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Your gift for imagery is amazing
I love your work, it is always a pleasure to read it.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Pufalove
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12 posted 10-01-1999 09:38 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

I wish I had such a way with words!
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Wonderful
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14 posted 10-01-1999 10:55 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

The work you put into your poetry is obvious...and a tribute to you. Beautiful Job.
Alwye
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15 posted 10-02-1999 12:33 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you all so much for your kindness.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


johnt300
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16 posted 10-02-1999 06:17 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Very good piece. Very dense and vivid. Thank you!
 
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