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trying to say goodbye

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IsabelleSkye
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0 posted 09-30-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for IsabelleSkye

I probably shouldn't post this, but I felt I really needed to. Forgive me. I.Skye
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take my hand, pull me close
close your eyes and feel my kiss
taste the wine on my lips
feel the warm sweet rush of pleasure
as our bodies touch, as passions flare
one last time

you know I'll always be yours
body, mind, and soul
but I know our love is just stolen moments
a flight of fantasy and fire

I'll always love you
there's this garden in my heart
so secret, that will always be yours

I've never been touched so deep
or smiled the way you make me smile
or felt the things you make me feel

kiss me like we are forever
touch me like I'm yours
for I just don't know how to say the words

the clock ticks away our love
stealing each precious moment we have left
as midnight speaks her mournful tune

I touch you once more
fingers lingering, memorizing
as I sear the memory of you onto my very soul
knowing tonight is the last time
I will ever feel your skin next to mine

I can't go.
I can't tear myself away.

the tears slip down my cheek
in rivers of pain
as I try to say good-bye


© Copyright 1999 IsabelleSkye - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-30-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

No, you definitely should post it. Hauntingly sad..your pain pulses in each line and the sadness you feel is imbedded in each word.


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Denise
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2 posted 09-30-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad. Very well written.

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Denise
Nan
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3 posted 09-30-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Luv ya IZZY...... You too, Saxon
Michael
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4 posted 09-30-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Your emotion is very strong. It has made this a very powerful piece. You shouldn't ask forgiveness for such a wonderful work from such a giving heart.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.


caroline
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5 posted 09-30-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Isabelle, this poem is stunning in its sadness. It definitely reaches into the soul.
Beautifully written.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
RobertB
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6 posted 09-30-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

You just wrote what I can't about a piece of my life that lasted not near long enough. I felt every word in every line. Thank you for posting it. Thank you very much indeed. I have cried more the last few months than the total of my whole life.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Colin
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7 posted 10-01-1999 02:08 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Phone me.
DreamEvil
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8 posted 10-01-1999 02:14 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Izzy, my kindred soul, I feel for you. All my hugs to you.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Nicole
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9 posted 10-01-1999 02:24 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

This is heartbreaking..."for I just don't know how to say the words"...I think you said them perfectly.
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 10-01-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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11 posted 10-01-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

WOW! So very well done... so heartbreakingly sad!
hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 10-01-1999 04:39 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful Izzy.....I absolutely loved this and what a loss for all of us had you not posted this

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Dark Angel
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13 posted 10-01-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Isabelle, this is truly a very sad poem yet so beautiful. Beautifully written. Glad you posted it.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


mia
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14 posted 10-01-1999 07:55 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I felt your pain... I love that:
Kiss me like we are forever
touch me like I'm yours
for I just don't know how to say the words
Wow did i ever miss your poems... This one was really special... I loved it!

Mia
 
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