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Alwye
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0 posted 09-30-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Amber deeply emblazons an emerald vision,
Autumn brilliance painted upon the breeze.
Beauty dances with the early morning sun,
Flooding through dark, jewel toned leaves.

Boundless skies are feathered creamy white,
As fingertips of blue touch this vast meadow.
By your side I embrace the perfect sight,
And nurtured by our touch, true love does grow.

The flight of time seems so distant here,
Almost as if for us, the world has stilled.
I feel so complete when you hold me near,
A glance into your eyes and my soul is filled.

If love were a vision, it surely must be this,
Amber softly brushed upon deep emerald leaves.
Upon my soul, you have left your tender kiss,
And now my heart dances upon the painted breeze.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-30-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Absolutely beautiful! Love is great and so is autumn! You have so wonderfully wedded the two!

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Thank you very much!! I appreciate it! I too love autumn.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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3 posted 10-01-1999 01:24 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wonderful Alwye, simply wonderful.
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Love the imagery, and as always, fall is my favorite season

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5 posted 10-03-1999 11:46 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice Alwye.... The only problem I have with autumn is that it doesn't last long enough....
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You've done it again, Alwye! Truly beautiful.
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gorgeous Alwye........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Alwye
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Thank you all very much.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


 
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