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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-09-30 08:46 PM


Amber deeply emblazons an emerald vision,
Autumn brilliance painted upon the breeze.
Beauty dances with the early morning sun,
Flooding through dark, jewel toned leaves.

Boundless skies are feathered creamy white,
As fingertips of blue touch this vast meadow.
By your side I embrace the perfect sight,
And nurtured by our touch, true love does grow.

The flight of time seems so distant here,
Almost as if for us, the world has stilled.
I feel so complete when you hold me near,
A glance into your eyes and my soul is filled.

If love were a vision, it surely must be this,
Amber softly brushed upon deep emerald leaves.
Upon my soul, you have left your tender kiss,
And now my heart dances upon the painted breeze.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



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Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-30 08:50 PM


Absolutely beautiful! Love is great and so is autumn! You have so wonderfully wedded the two!

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Denise

Alwye
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2 posted 1999-09-30 09:06 PM


Thank you very much!! I appreciate it! I too love autumn.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



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3 posted 1999-10-01 01:24 AM


Wonderful Alwye, simply wonderful.
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4 posted 1999-10-01 11:19 PM


Love the imagery, and as always, fall is my favorite season

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Nan
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5 posted 1999-10-03 11:46 AM


Very nice Alwye.... The only problem I have with autumn is that it doesn't last long enough....
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6 posted 1999-10-03 01:09 PM


You've done it again, Alwye! Truly beautiful.
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7 posted 1999-10-03 02:15 PM


gorgeous Alwye........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Alwye
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8 posted 1999-10-03 04:38 PM


Thank you all very much.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



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