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THIS is an attempt at Hiaku...I think.

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Marilyn
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0 posted 09-30-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

I feel your closeness
Your touch on my soft skin
Your breath on my neck

Our hearts become one
Souls tied fast by strands of time
Nothing can tear down

I feel your soft kiss
Long for you to stay forever
I know you must go away

In my heart you'll stay
Ever charished my love
I am truely blest

For to have known love
But to have to had to let go
To have felt complete

Then to have never
Felt your kiss on my sweet lips
I will always love

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1 posted 09-30-1999 08:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I don't know very much about the different forms of poetry, but I know that I like this!

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Marilyn
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2 posted 09-30-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I don't know much about the different forms either...but I am learning!
Beki
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3 posted 10-01-1999 03:49 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

no, not haiku, but a beautifully written poem just the same :-)
Marilyn
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4 posted 10-01-1999 10:30 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Beki....I have been informed that you are the one to ask about haiku. Please tell me where to find how to write haiku. This is the form I found when I looked for it. Do you know what this form is? I am trying to learn but seem to be getting no where fast. I am going to be using the tutorials when they come on line.
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5 posted 10-01-1999 05:05 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful

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6 posted 11-06-1999 07:45 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Marilyn
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7 posted 11-06-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Ok..I am confused?????? All my old stuff is being dragged to the surface...I'm flattered but don't understand?
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Lovely!

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