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fishing for faith

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Martie
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0 posted 09-30-1999 07:57 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Underline in red
the mistakes I've made,
sliding under ropes
that were meant to keep me out,
pacing my steps to imagined
devils pace,
listening to the truth
of all this silence.

Play me a song
that covers and stills
the noisy breath
of my searching heart
and opens the sky
to the filiment
of my questioning pole,
to fish for truth
in heaven's galaxy.
© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell-Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-30-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great! I enjoyed this one very much!

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2 posted 09-30-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I really liked this one. He called and said, Come! Follow the fisher of men. Tis in the soft still voice you'll hear. May your fishing produce much faith!
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3 posted 11-06-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Time for this one to get a second viewing
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How did I miss this one? Beautiful imagery, Martie, displayed here.
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5 posted 11-06-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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