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Open Poetry #3

fishing for faith

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 1999-09-30 07:57 PM

Underline in red
the mistakes I've made,
sliding under ropes
that were meant to keep me out,
pacing my steps to imagined
devils pace,
listening to the truth
of all this silence.

Play me a song
that covers and stills
the noisy breath
of my searching heart
and opens the sky
to the filiment
of my questioning pole,
to fish for truth
in heaven's galaxy.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-30 08:42 PM

This is great! I enjoyed this one very much!

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-30 11:44 PM

I really liked this one. He called and said, Come! Follow the fisher of men. Tis in the soft still voice you'll hear. May your fishing produce much faith!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 1999-11-06 07:14 PM

Time for this one to get a second viewing

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-11-06 09:00 PM

How did I miss this one? Beautiful imagery, Martie, displayed here.

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-06 11:04 PM

Enjoyed this much!

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