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Returning of A Love

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Lynn
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0 posted 09-30-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


Returning of A Love

He sits there
praying to be found
by someone other than himself.

He loved her
beyond the earth
which no words could desrcibe.

He walks here
roaming the lands
that he once roamed with her.

He lies under
the stars of heaven
hoping for the return of his love.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

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Denise
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1 posted 09-30-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done! So much meaning portrayed with so few words! I love it!

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Denise
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Lynn: If only..

HUGS

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Lonely and Lovely!
hoot_owl_rn
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Good one Lynn...looking forwad to more and welcome to the group

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
U K Hero
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5 posted 10-01-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

For me, you touched a tender cord... loved it
Isis
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Beautiful Lynn, I can relate to this one.

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
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7 posted 10-01-1999 07:06 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lynn, this is lovley, sad but lovley

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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