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Misty Moonlight

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 09-30-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Misty Moonlight

Mindless moments
of time elapsing
trapped within
a floating bubble.
Twinkling stars
singing in unison
as misty moonlight
dances by.
© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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1 posted 09-30-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Very well done. You portrayed a huge emotion is few powerful words.
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2 posted 09-30-1999 07:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Not a syllable gone to waste. Excellent.
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3 posted 09-30-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful! I was there!

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Denise
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4 posted 10-01-1999 12:33 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

I enjoyed.
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 10-01-1999 04:44 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I thank you all
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 10-01-1999 05:13 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Absolutely beautiful and moving, not a wasted word amoung them

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7 posted 10-02-1999 05:10 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Nice. As already said, nothing wasted.
Nan
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8 posted 10-03-1999 04:40 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This style seems to work well for you LD..
Munda
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9 posted 10-23-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I liked this one.....a lot ! : )
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In the space between moments


10 posted 10-23-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very lovely!

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11 posted 10-24-1999 10:29 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

I liked this!
Nice (brief) descrption!

I.Skye


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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II
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Perhaps the best of yours yet. Definitely, a style for you. I echo the others when saying you have not wasted a word. Concise and succinct.... keep them coming.

dp
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