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when you hurt

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Iloveit
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0 posted 09-30-1999 05:11 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

when you hurt

when you hurt, I hurt,
can I help my love?

can I look in your eyes
and send you my strength?

can I hold your hand
and let my energy seep in?

can I just be quietly by your side,
no words necessary?

can we talk a million words,
until we have talked you better?

can I hold you in my arms,
kiss your sweet lips
and send you to bliss?

you give so much to me,
what can I give to you?

when you hurt, I hurt,
can I help my love?


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1999 Iloveit

© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-30-1999 05:31 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: *sigh*

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Marilyn
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2 posted 09-30-1999 05:32 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Elequaintly written. I agree from the depth of my soul. This is how I feel when someone dear to me hurts. Thankyou for this wonderful piece.
suicidal dreams
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3 posted 09-30-1999 05:39 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

hmm this is how i feel when i look at the girl im in love with. Seeing her happy makes me happy, and seeing her upset makes me upset.

Very good poem to i really enjoyed reading it.

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life is short kill quick
Iloveit
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4 posted 09-30-1999 05:56 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep RG, I know, we are much alike and hugs back

and Marilyn and Suicidal Dreams, thanks glad you liked it....

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and just a note today is my friday, so if you post on this...and not presuming any will lol...but if, I don't want any to think I disappeared but...I won't be back til monday, so you have my thanks

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Balladeer
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5 posted 09-30-1999 06:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

yes, it is a helpless feeling to see someone you care hurting. Sometimes just being there is enough to matter
Denise
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6 posted 09-30-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely!

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Denise
WhtDove
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7 posted 09-30-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Don't ya wish you could help them by touching and letting it flow in? By looking into their eyes and give them the strength they need? Wonderfully written, really nice thought. Balladeer's right there. Sometimes all it takes is just being there.
JTF
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8 posted 10-01-1999 03:34 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Lovely HFG ... Enjoy your 3 days weekend ! ...
Dragoness
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9 posted 10-01-1999 03:44 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

So sweet....well done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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10 posted 10-01-1999 11:48 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful, Lovey... How much we wish our love could heal... how helpless we feel having nothing else to offer! Great job, O&O!
Sally S.
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11 posted 10-01-1999 01:12 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Sometimes you need that special someone to be there even just to sit and hold you for a while. I know exactly what you mean.
Michael
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12 posted 10-01-1999 02:02 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

It's so hard to see a loved one in pain. You capture this well. Very sweet, well done.

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Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP



Toerag
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13 posted 10-01-1999 02:14 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

My dear one and only...when ya hurt down there....Let Toerag know.....cuz I'll kiss it where....well...you know....and you'll hurt no more.....I give ya my word....or at least you won't care.....that's for sure....
LngJhnAg
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14 posted 10-01-1999 03:02 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

yeah, and Lovey? If you hurt down there, it won't be because of anything old Toe could have done (i.e., => ). Actually, when I hurt I hate it when somebody tries to get me to talk... just being a man... that's all I wanna do.
Pepper
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15 posted 10-01-1999 03:36 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oh my.....lovely thinking Iloveit......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Saxoness
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16 posted 10-01-1999 04:13 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

made me cry, very lovely. very.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 10-01-1999 05:40 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I can truly relate
Dark Angel
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18 posted 10-01-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

this is beautiful,we do feel helpless when someone is hurting.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Iloveit
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19 posted 10-04-1999 09:38 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks all, this poem brought back sad memories to me all weekend, so to come back this morning and see how it touched all of you means much to me, thank you
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