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Open Poetry #3

revalation

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-09-30 04:44 PM

Writing on this paper my thoughts, my ideas, my life spills from this pen.
The more I write the more I reveal, the more I let be known.
Eventually the writting stops, because this shell it dies.
Eventually im non-existent.

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life is short kill quick

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-09-30 05:16 PM

Keep writing because you pour out the pain and let in the hope. I understand the pain and darkness. Keep posting here and others will help you refill. You have found a wonderful place. Let it wrap you in it's warmth.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

2 posted 1999-09-30 05:19 PM

interesting words. Thx for words of encoragement

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life is short kill quick

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

3 posted 1999-09-30 06:18 PM

wow I liked marilyns reply as much as I liked the poem, wonderful hearts and words we find in this place

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-09-30 09:14 PM

I LIKE!

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Denise

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