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Outlaw Dawn

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PhaerieChild
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0 posted 09-30-1999 03:12 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PhaerieChild


----- Original Message -----
From: dj burt <danandwendy@juno.com>
To: <shasta99@uswest.net>
Sent: Thursday, September 30, 1999 12:47 AM
Subject: Re: hi guys


This came from my brother who lives in Oklahoma. He started being a dope dealer. Thank God he quit that. Then he became an outlaw biker. Then he became a preacher...then he became a cop..now he's an outlaw biker preacher.
>
> Outlaw Dawn
>
> Sin all came crashin down, hard
> love most ever known, even dreamed, dead.
> Wee hours of darkest, coldest, winter night
> alone, broken, crazy, out of head.
>
> Gun barrel freezin to wet cheek
> heavy metal shakin out lonely blues.
> Twisted love poundin, tearin out the speakers
> been here so many times, why it feelin new?
>
> God whisperin to hold on til dawn
> ain't thinkin, can't stand no more wait.
> Filled with molten lava called sorrow
> freezin out, insides burnin with hate.
>
> Nother day, stoned cold, hatin
> sick and tired o' being sick and tired.
> Pain, sorrow, alone...Ghost be talkin
> history stayin, whether drunk or wired.
>
> God whisperin again, won't leave it alone
> memories, seein a little boy a prayin.
> was it me, nother night so long ago
> hey speak up God,
> i need to hear what you're sayin...
>
> D.J.Burt 9/99
> Wendy Isle
> (all rights reserved)

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

© Copyright 1999 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 09-30-1999 04:39 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hey! Is Toerag your brother????

this was a deep poem
Nan
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2 posted 09-30-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I like the finale, WildChild
Balladeer
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3 posted 09-30-1999 07:07 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is what is called REAL poetry.
Denise
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4 posted 09-30-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is fantastic!

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Denise
PhaerieChild
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5 posted 09-30-1999 11:10 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Glad you liked it guys. Been tryin' to talk him into comin' and checkin' us out but he's been real busy with his webmastering gigs so doesn't think he'll have the time. I'm gonna keep tryin though lol

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Pepper
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6 posted 10-02-1999 10:52 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very intense....WildChild, I see talent runs in the family.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
 
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