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Alicat
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0 posted 09-30-1999 01:27 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat


Lowing softly in the night
Through grassy plains with scented dew
I await your call to summon my heart
An echoing memory within my mind
Still I stride, lowing softly in the night
Through grassy caves and canyons
Hiding me from predators swift
Hiding them from me
Are you still there
Mon coeur
I hear your bell
I hear your call
I hear your name upon the wind
Rustling through the tall, sweet grass
Cantilou, Cantilou, floating on deep summer night
You are my love, none other will do
You for me and me for you
I need you more than want you, I want you forevermore
Lowing softly in the night, Cantilou, Cantilou


Alicat stricken with a bovine stare

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 09-30-1999).]
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Sunshine
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1 posted 09-30-1999 03:29 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

It works well for me! Pleasureable reading, Ali!
RainbowGirl
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2 posted 09-30-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Loved it..:-)))

HUGS

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Nicole
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3 posted 09-30-1999 04:50 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

hehehehe...ah sweet bovine love, you've done it again sug! Loved it
Lucie
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4 posted 09-30-1999 05:13 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

its not just a good poem.. it looks preeeetty toooo..

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Nan
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5 posted 09-30-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, Alicat - I love the format and the theme..... Bravo!!
Denise
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6 posted 09-30-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

WOW! This is beautiful!

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7 posted 10-01-1999 11:23 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice format!

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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 10-02-1999 02:12 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

When I first looked at the format, I thout it would be difficult to read. But negative on that one you frisky feline. Instead, it flooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwweeeddddd from word to word. Well done!
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9 posted 03-05-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

number 15 !
 
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