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The happiest days of my life
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The happiest days of my life |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
The day I met you my life changed... I didn't know it right away. My friend liked you so I tried to help her out I asked you if you liked her Your answer wasn't good We started talking from day to day I loved to hear what you had to say When I'd leave,i missed you I didn't say it,and no one knew Then this guy asked me out I said yes only then to find out you liked me all that time For no reason you read me a rhyme That you had written for your friend I'm sorry she's gone I can't take her place, but now that he is gone, I can wipe the tears from your face You told me that you felt so alone I am here to be your girlfriend,but I am also here to be your best friend Everyday-You're on my mind and every time I want to cry You make me feel as I have Never felt before Thank you for showing up because I needed a friend more than you will ever know And from what you say You feel the same way My dear, the happiest days of my life are the days that are spent with you  I'll always love you!Dedicated to Josh .B.(my baby )I know this doesn't really rhyme or make a lot of sense to anyone, but this guy that I just started going out with makes me the happiest person alive and this is the happiest that I have ever been in my whole life! ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories survive* |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Congratulations my friend! Acutally, this does make sense to me..maybe because my story is very similar to yours. Good luck with him, Meli!! Great work!------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
only 1 reply to such a sweet poem???!!! I really enjoyed this! I know how happy you mustve been when you penned this. Well, I am wondering if u r still with this guy, it has been 3 years lol. |
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