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U K Hero
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0 posted 08-31-99 12:28 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for U K Hero

So who are you
O little one
To catch my eye upon this earth,
Why, Im so light
That when in flight
My wings are twice my girth.

And what do you do
With wings today
My angel dust prey tell me,
Why, I dance in love
For romance above
And little flowers plenty.

And why do you
Dance so daintily
In search for lovers handy?
Why, I dance for joy
A natures ploy
But lovers I not any.

So tell me when
The time of day
A lover you hope to match,
Why, half past three
Beyond oak tree
A lover I hope to catch

But tell me sir
To who you are
To ask me questions many,
Who am I?
A romantic guy
And you my butterfly candy!

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1 posted 08-31-99 12:58 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

With a twitch of your wand, I could see this as a child's poem. But for us Old Folks, all I can say is "Well done sir!" So glad to have you aboard!
U K Hero
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2 posted 08-31-99 04:32 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

So it is.
I just felt like writing something light and refreshing and behold, it appeared as if by magic..
Pepper
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3 posted 08-31-99 04:40 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

really nice read and you are right;it is refreshing.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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4 posted 08-31-99 04:43 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Ditto on the refreshing! In fact, it kind of reminded me of..um...well, a nursery rhyme. Good job.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."



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Nan
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5 posted 08-31-99 10:39 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Such Fun!!!
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6 posted 10-16-1999 08:31 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This really makes me smile...a conversation with a butterfly. Enchanting!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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7 posted 10-17-1999 12:12 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I loved this! Everything flowed so well and the sentiment, ahh, tis grand!
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8 posted 02-11-2002 05:40 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

this is great! the title drew me in
I love it!!!
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nice...like it
 
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