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My mixed emotions

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WhtDove
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0 posted 08-31-99 12:22 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I know the syllable count isn't great. But it reflects how I feel right now! It's all mixed up!


You left me tangled emotions!
And hurt from angry notions!
Words...what a poweful potion!


My intention was not to cause you pain!
It was not done for selfish gain!
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I want to share your pain,
And your happiness too.
I want to be there for you,
In all that you go through!
I merely want to be your friend,
That'll be there till the very end!
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All I can give is my heart! And that is all of me!

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-31-99).]
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Michael
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1 posted 08-31-99 12:32 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

You have nothing to apologize for.
This is a very touching piece.

Michael
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2 posted 08-31-99 12:33 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you sweet Michael!!!
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3 posted 08-31-99 12:42 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

WhtDove: You captured the frustration of wanting to be there for someone who says "no thanks" very well... I like it!
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Thank you Suthern!

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