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Something Beautiful and Breath-taking...

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~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


0 posted 08-31-99 11:26 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Something beautiful and breath-taking
To mellow out your soul...
Something heart-warming and relaxing
has now become my goal...
You want beauty from these words of mine-
Sit back and close your eyes.
Iíll entice you with my sweetest wine
And promise no more lies...

The fresh scent of newly cut grass
and the rose-colored times in the sunrise
is where I am.
My paper is made of stardust.
My pen, a magic wand.
And I float about in fancy-free moments
upon a pink, cotton-candy-like cloud.
I hover above cities made up of tiny stars and planets.
I surf over oceans, petting Orcaís back.
And slowly, I find a sunset melting away
In to the sky...

So many, many muses...

Candlelight and Romance...
Fire, burning embers and kisses
On a clear, starry night-
fireflies in flight...
and crickets in symphony...
Mountains and Crystal lakes...
The comfort of the cool, crisp air...
And a pair of Loverís Arms entangled...

Ah, but then the Voice of the Song takes up my senses...
I fly through half notes, whole notes,
Rests and G-Clefs...
Humming tunes that I touch freely...
Up and Down, To and Fro...
My song becomes a dance upon a checkered ballroom floor...
And I am wearing an elegant night-dress,
Like a princess or a queen...
Stepping and swaying under moonlight,
In love, I turn in to your face
And on through my muses...
Past my childrenís laughter and into their eyes-
Right in to that starry sparkle past their lashes...

And then through a Darkness I fly toward a Light-
Warm and inviting... loving and accepting... gentle and kind...
Your love for me-
Something beautiful and breath-taking, indeed.

©1999 Erin Solari

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-31-99 11:32 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Damn! This drove me to tears and that is hard enough to do on my best days. Today, I would've thought it impossible. Thank you, dear, for giving me exactly what I asked you for and so much more.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


2 posted 08-31-99 11:35 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

The pleasure was all mine...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
Southern Florida

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3 posted 08-31-99 11:39 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

what a "Breath-taking" journey you have taken us on....loved this....great work!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


4 posted 08-31-99 11:40 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank very much, Pepper!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Michael
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since 08-13-99
Posts 6333
California


5 posted 08-31-99 12:31 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Exquisite work here One Voice.
Indeed, your pen is magic.

Michael
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


6 posted 08-31-99 06:27 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Michael, thank you... Your compliment means a lot to me!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


caroline
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since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


7 posted 08-31-99 06:34 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I think you have more than one voice! This sings like a host of angels...WOW! It IS breathtaking!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Alwye
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In the space between moments


8 posted 08-31-99 09:49 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow...indeed breathtaking, one voice..truly phenomenal work...thank you for taking us along on this journey.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


DreamEvil
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9 posted 10-16-1999 02:25 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My love, I am glad to once again see this wonder you have crafted for me as you are the sole wonder of my world. Forever and always.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

 
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