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Tears

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Tim
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0 posted 08-31-99 10:22 AM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

She cries
at his demise.
Tears.
Fears.
What will portend
at life mates end?
Endless grief,
lost belief.
Frustration,
isolation.
Alone,
on her own.
Cope?
Hope?
She dies.
No one cries.
No tears.
No fears.
Portend?
End.
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Emmy
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1 posted 08-31-99 07:54 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

Quite a unique rhyming style there. I don't think I've ever seen a poem done that way before. I like it, I really like it. Keep writing!
WhtDove
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2 posted 08-31-99 07:57 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I liked it also! Stands on it's own! Great job!!!!
caroline
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3 posted 08-31-99 08:02 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Really well done! I like the style you used..it fits the words you chose...makes it all flow together quite nicely.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Nan
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4 posted 08-31-99 10:56 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Effectively portentious......Nice job...
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5 posted 09-01-99 10:06 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Sad, and well done.
passing shadows
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short and powerful
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