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If I Ran Away

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~one voice~
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0 posted 08-31-99 08:16 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Could you forgive if I ran away?
Would I leave you feeling bitter and cold?
And if I never saw another day,
Would you still love me till you reeked of old?

Would I leave you feeling bitter and cold?
Would you ache for me if you found me gone?
Would you love me till you reeked of old?
Would you remember me after too long?

Would you ache for me if you found me gone?
Would you search for me throughout your lifetime?
Would you remember me after too long?
Would you dream of me in your sweet night-time?

Would you search for me throughout your lifetime?
Or might you never even let me go?
Would you dream of in your sweet night-time?
Wrap your arms around me, calming me so?

Or might you never even let me go?
Crave my soul for what you find me to be...
Wrap your arms around me, calming me so...
Lover, please donít ever let go of me...

Crave my soul for what you find me to be...
And if I never saw another day,
Lover, please donít ever let go of me...
Could you forgive me if ran away?

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


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Comtesse de Chamillart
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1 posted 08-31-99 08:18 AM       View Profile for Comtesse de Chamillart   Email Comtesse de Chamillart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Comtesse de Chamillart

I like pantoums...

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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~
DreamEvil
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2 posted 08-31-99 08:27 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

First, an excellent pantoum but that is a given considering your talent. Next, I for one couldn't forgive myself if a lover ran away.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


~one voice~
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3 posted 08-31-99 08:37 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


passing shadows
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this is an excellent format!
 
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