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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Standing on the edge Discovering fears deep inside The swirling abyss lies before me. Beckoning, Taunting, Calling my name. Slowly moving forward, Hanging on with both hands, my eyes closed. Afraid to slip, Afraid to see. A leap of faith: Plunging into the unknown. Total release. Complete surrender. Flying free. Falling fast. No holding back. Knowing you’ll be there to catch me. [This message has been edited by Tara Simms (edited 08-31-99).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I love the structure you have used here - the short images really suspend time and give a sense of breathlessness. This is great, Tara. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! Trust is a rare commodity!  |
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