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Pain delves beneath each layer;
True, it burrows deep within;
Sure it sifts the soul - then finer
-For it seeks the best therein;

It takes its precious treasures
-Then it tends them o'er the flame;
By the crucible it hovers;
Purest silver is its aim.

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Hmmm - very mysterious! This could be interpreted in many ways. It makes me think of alchemy (althought that's gold not silver). Anyway, I really like it.
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Thank you Severn, I'm glad you liked it.
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awesome piece
 
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