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Friendly Punches and Chinese Burns.. A challenge from Giulia

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 08-30-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

We settle into the sofa
To watch our favourite Tv show
Suddenly a friendly punch is given
Oh , hell that was one big blow

I look you in the eye
And warn you of what I'm about to give
A punch so hard
You won't be able to forgive

Now we've commenced one great battle
Friendly Punches and chinese burns
Because of our immature prattle
We each won't give up our turns .

Now my Dear, lets not hear you whinge
For your Chinese burns really sting
I feel no guilt, ok maybe a twinge
Did you master it in Peking?

Well sister now I must leave
Our Tv show has ended
Til next week, I believe
By then we would've mended
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-30-99 10:00 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Cute! Sounds like friendly rough-housing to me!
WhtDove
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2 posted 08-30-99 11:01 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I thought this was cute too! Darn those Chinese burns!!!
Skyfyre
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3 posted 08-30-99 11:11 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Whew ... I was so glad to read something lighthearted from you ... I was beginning to worry after I read all that sad, bitter (albeit beautiful) stuff you have been posting lately ...

This brought a smile to my face ... hee hee ... think I'll go and rough up my little brother ...

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")




[This message has been edited by Nochtdraco (edited 08-30-99).]
Dark Angel
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4 posted 08-31-99 03:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thanks so much poet and WhtDove, it was fun writing it , something a little different

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Nochtdraco....Thank you, I'm glad I put a smile on your face. Oh, and be gentle with your little brother
DreamEvil
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5 posted 08-31-99 10:12 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Too funny!

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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Dark Angel
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6 posted 08-31-99 05:24 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Glad you enjoyed it Dream Thank you !!
 
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