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The Wanted One

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caroline
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0 posted 08-30-99 07:21 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline

the wanted one

Another kind intention
of your own invention?
Was she your good deed for the day?
Is it your conscience you assuage?
Everything's all right in your world
Querida's still your girl
Her tone was sweet and mild
Sin the anger and the wild
that used to mar her lips
Those you shushed with fingertips
and silence…deadly silence smoked
with the love that you revoked
You clear the air with incense
Make a well-timed little pretense
and you can sleep tonight
while in the smothered light
Querida's still awake
and its a voodoo doll she makes
Baby, all the pins stick in
where your heart should have been
in a nightmare you perspire
she's thrown the doll into the fire
The Wanted One lives again
throws your memory to the wind...

caroline 1999
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Seymour Tabin
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caroline,
You out did yourself on this one. A touching arrow and I'm sure it hit the mark.
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2 posted 08-31-99 05:37 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

*G* Well Seymour, if only those pins had hit their mark....LOL!!

Thanks for your words.

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