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caroline
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0 posted 1999-08-30 07:21 PM


the wanted one

Another kind intention
of your own invention?
Was she your good deed for the day?
Is it your conscience you assuage?
Everything's all right in your world
Querida's still your girl
Her tone was sweet and mild
Sin the anger and the wild
that used to mar her lips
Those you shushed with fingertips
and silence…deadly silence smoked
with the love that you revoked
You clear the air with incense
Make a well-timed little pretense
and you can sleep tonight
while in the smothered light
Querida's still awake
and its a voodoo doll she makes
Baby, all the pins stick in
where your heart should have been
in a nightmare you perspire
she's thrown the doll into the fire
The Wanted One lives again
throws your memory to the wind...

caroline 1999
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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 1999-08-30 09:30 PM


caroline,
You out did yourself on this one. A touching arrow and I'm sure it hit the mark.

caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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2 posted 1999-08-31 05:37 AM


*G* Well Seymour, if only those pins had hit their mark....LOL!!

Thanks for your words.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

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