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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom

0 posted 1999-08-30 06:22 PM


I love you
and I want you
I want you
and I need you
I want to live with you
but can't
and I can't have you
because I can't have both....
So...
I love you
but can't have you
so therefore
I don't need you
and even though
I love you
we can't share it
so therefore
I let you go
even though I love you
so...

No wonder I'm old!!!!

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-08-30 08:31 PM


Interesting! I do like the way you put it!
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-08-31 09:41 PM


Have I experienced this!? Yes ma'm I have! Very nicely put!

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