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The kiss

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-30-99 03:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

The Kiss

I lie below a white sky.
Under the light of noon.
Rorsahak clouds nestle and fly.
And I am near to swoon.

She lies my side puckered lips
And I am near to swoon.
Touching her with finger tips
Under the light of noon.

My heart pounds from simple bliss
Under the light of noon
Bending down to steal a kiss
And I am near to swoon.

Do I dare these lips in haste
Under the light of noon.
Do I dare these lips to taste
And I am near to swoon.

My heart, I feel a miss, all
In the want of a kiss.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-30-99 04:13 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very sweet Sy

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
caroline
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I really enjoyed this! Its "kissed"!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 08-30-99 09:23 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper and caroline,
A kiss for both of you *L*
Alwye
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Beautiful...and so sweet!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Alwye
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Beautiful...and so sweet!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Skyfyre
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Is this a particular type of poem (such as villanelle, etc) or a Tabin Original?

Either way, excellent job ... the repeated lines worked really well.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


Severn
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A work suitable to inspire anyone to want to be kissed - gotta go find that man of mine! Wonderful, Seymour.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 08-31-99 08:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

nochtdraco and Severn,
This is my own style Noch, It just felt right to me. Severn I'm sending you a kiss till that special guy come along. *L*
Alwye, thank you for the double post and read.
moonmoon
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Do I qualify for a kiss too?? *wink wink*

Good job Seymour..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 08-31-99 09:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Moonmoon,
Yours I'll save for the light of the moon
Thank you for the wink
It made me blink.
snow in summer
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there is a particular form of poem that this is very close to... or is... i'm not sure which. it is a French word... vanenille??
that's not the word, but something like that. anyway, this is a neat use of two repeating lines that that form uses also. i enjoyed this one.
passing shadows
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you were good way back when...better today...enjoy reading your old stuff Sy
 
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