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The Dark and Light

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WhtDove
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0 posted 08-30-99 03:55 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Some days the darkness sits on you,
Like grass when wet with morning dew.
The darkness seeps from deep inside,
And leaves you on a great divide.
The mixed up feelings you possess,
The dark and pain cause much distress.
You fight against the dark and swear.
You feel alone and in despair.
As darkness seems to hang around,
Your happiness cannot be found.

I will be there my friend, in plight,
To help you with the dark you fight.
No matter what and through it all,
For you, I'll be there when you call.


You have this darkness, I see through,
To find this love and warmth in you...


I've seen it in you from the start,
The love you hold within your heart.
This gentle side I see from you,
Shows warmth and care in things you do.
Compassion, Strength and wisdom too,
Strong qualities I find in you!
You're warm and caring to a friend,
A heartfelt thanks do I extend.
I'm glad to have you as my friend,
And I will love you with no end!

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Gentle Soul
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1 posted 08-30-99 03:58 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

I love it, is beautiful!

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Denise
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2 posted 08-30-99 04:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent, Whtdove! And you were asking for pointers from me? This is absolutely beautiful!

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Denise
DreamEvil
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3 posted 08-30-99 07:23 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I'm simply speechless from the sentiment I feel for this tribute. Thank you is not enough, but thank you I do.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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WhtDove
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4 posted 08-30-99 07:39 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you Gentle Soul.

dsnyder, I thank you! It took me quite a long time. I usually don't write like this.


Dream no thanks necessary my friend!
Severn
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5 posted 08-30-99 11:47 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is a really sensitive piece, WhiteDove. Lovely and a really nice tribute. I love your opening quatrain.
WhtDove
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6 posted 08-31-99 12:05 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you so much Severn! I appreciate that!
Pepper
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7 posted 08-31-99 12:38 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oh my...very moving
Dark Angel
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8 posted 08-31-99 03:05 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove....This is excellent!!!!
Toerag
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9 posted 08-31-99 10:14 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

It almost sounds like a prayer! Well done gal.....
WhtDove
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10 posted 08-31-99 10:20 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you Pepper, DA, and Toe! Your replies mean a lot to me! Toe, it is almost a prayer! Its just how I see the 2 sides of one person!
Sunshine
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11 posted 08-31-99 11:07 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is something you should send to all of your friends, and they will then know what they have in you. Well done!
WhtDove
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12 posted 08-31-99 11:47 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you Sunshine! You don't know what those words meant to me at this moment! Thank you!!!!
Toerag
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13 posted 08-31-99 11:52 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Speaking of "having something IN you"...how about we uh, um, er, uh, never mind.......just being a Toerag........
WhtDove
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14 posted 08-31-99 12:31 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL...well, Thanks for being just a Toerag! Thanks for the thought!?
Toerag
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15 posted 08-31-99 12:33 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yanno?....I've had countless emails from ladies saying I'm incorrigible...and I can't find my Funk and Wagnalls?..That is a "good" thing...right?
WhtDove
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16 posted 08-31-99 12:41 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL...I am not quite sure what's good for you Toerag! They said if it was good for you to stay away from it, right?
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