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Random Acts v. Dark Intent
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Random Acts v. Dark Intent |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Random Acts v. Dark Intent I’ve no mind for someone who weaves around their dark intentions and leaves sadness in their wake, I’d rather take the chance to bring a smile, not a frown to the people I chance to hang around. No one needs to stand alone, encumbered with dark, mean words interrupting slumber because they broke with words they spoke the essence of one’s life, someone’s dream just for a chance to pass around their mean. Ah, those with dark intentions come and roam invading lives, loves, romances, homes, an intruder, yes, with hateful caress taking from those who have worked so long at a life’s vision’s dream, once lingering, now gone. I think in life’s long hall of justice here on earth if I were to have a case of any substantial worth “Random Acts versus Dark Intent’s Curses” then by passions of good people gathered forth we’d send those with dark intent far, far south of north. I’d banish them to their own Hell’s delights where they could then live with their own frights while here above we could love and continue on with simple, random acts of kindnesses sprinkled liberally with love, hugs, and comforting kisses. 30 August, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sunshine, I too would like to banish the darkly intentional people to their own Hell and see how they would fare. This piece has an interesting meter. Good work. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sunshine: I do not say this lightly, but this is one of the best poems I've encountered within these poetic halls. A really great message finely worded. I liked the style you chose as well. Top shelf material! Thanks for sharing, I bow to you and yours. [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 08-30-99).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Bravo, one of your best. I'm proud of you. *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, Sunshine. Great message! I guess we all know our share of people with dark intentions. Thank God we know more of the other kind!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
GREAT WORK! yes,"Bravo"! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Truly a utopia this world would be, if everyone helped those in misery. Your dislike of the Dark perspective, interferes with God's directive. I believe he said to love one another, and treat our enemies as a brother. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I got your e-mail and would have responded in kind, but I'm having trouble sending out. Don't know the cause... I guess I'll have to make contact with my computer guru. All the same, I only wish to say "you're welcome" and that I believe "in credit, where credit is due." Once again, a great read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"I think in life’s long hall of justice here on earth if I were to have a case of any substantial worth “Random Acts versus Dark Intent’s Curses” then by passions of good people gathered forth we’d send those with dark intent far, far south of north." I LOVE THAT VERSE! I think this should be reposted in 32 |
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