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Helea
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since 1999-08-30
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0 posted 1999-08-30 11:12 AM


Your Charming Eyes...
By Helea

When I look at your eyes...I see your trueself
I see you’re sweet...and caring...
I see you’re smart...
I see you’re giving and forgiving...
I see your love for me...

When I look at your eyes I stop myself from crying...
When I’m alone and think about your eyes...I cry...
I can’t stop thinking that one day I’ll never see those eyes again...
That I’ll never see the love or the sweetness ...
Or the love that makes who you are...
One day you’ll be gone ...gone from me...
Gone from this world...
No matter what happens those eyes will one day close
And forever rest in peace...

But you’ll never be completely gone...
Because everytime I close my eyes...
There you will be.

© Copyright 1999 Helea - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-08-30 11:23 AM


Welcome, Helea! Glad to have you here.

I enjoyed this poem. Keep someone in your heart, and they'll never be truly gone-that's been said so many times, but it's still so true.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Helea
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 15
Canada
2 posted 1999-08-30 11:26 AM


I'm glad you liked it and Thank you.
miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
3 posted 1999-08-30 12:51 PM


loving someone that much can bring you hope and inner peace. thank you for reminding that i have someone.
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