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The anchor drags

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-30 10:57 AM

The anchor drags

Into the darkness where I was forced.
Held in malaise by angers storm.
The umbilical holds course
Tied to impose of form.
Vexed in my rancor.
Bound by a gag.
The anchor
Holds in
Drag.

Sunshine

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1 posted 1999-08-30 01:34 PM

I like this but with a question as to the fourth line. ?? Would you want to read it with "tied to impose on form."? and give me your thoughts on this suggestion.

I know this is not the CA, but I wanted to understand your meaning behind the line.

Thanks!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-08-30 03:38 PM

Sunshine,
You are right, it was a miss type on my part.
Thank you for the read and comment

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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3 posted 2004-04-17 02:19 PM

wow....I like!

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