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The anchor drags

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Seymour Tabin
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The anchor drags

Into the darkness where I was forced.
Held in malaise by angers storm.
The umbilical holds course
Tied to impose of form.
Vexed in my rancor.
Bound by a gag.
The anchor
Holds in
Drag.
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I like this but with a question as to the fourth line. ?? Would you want to read it with "tied to impose on form."? and give me your thoughts on this suggestion.

I know this is not the CA, but I wanted to understand your meaning behind the line.

Thanks!
Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine,
You are right, it was a miss type on my part.
Thank you for the read and comment
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wow....I like!
 
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