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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-30-99 07:11 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My trembling hand begins to stroke your hair.
Unsure, I dare to look into your eyes.
I tilt your head to me with gentle care.
Your kiss is both my reward and my prize.

I feel your body press up against mine.
The heat coming from you feeds my desire.
Pouting lips glow with the hue of red wine.
The love in my heart becomes a bonfire.

To the song in our hearts we will dance.
The love between us will always be there.
Entwining our arms we find romance.
Locked in this embrace we haven't a care.

The pain of that memory has been bled.
For three years now my lover has been dead.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 08-30-99 08:34 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW, Dream, this is beautiful. But sad also
WhtDove
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2 posted 08-30-99 08:36 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Here I was ready to say how romantic! Then wow, what a twist at the end! 'Twas romance with a sad ending! Great job! What a surprise!
Cinderella
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3 posted 08-30-99 09:11 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

How touching....Wonderful!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 08-30-99 10:15 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tragicly sad
Gentle Soul
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5 posted 08-30-99 02:07 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

wow brother.. productive nite I see.. this is good as usual love..

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Elizabeth
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6 posted 08-30-99 02:26 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

How many times have I been unpleasantly surprised with an ending like this The meter in this one is great, DE. Is it a true experience?

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Pepper
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7 posted 08-30-99 05:56 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

beautiful and sad...I love it.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
miriam
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8 posted 08-30-99 06:03 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

great twist at the end. But still...im sorry if it's true for you.

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miriam coronado
Tara Simms
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9 posted 08-30-99 06:08 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Romance with a dark side, hmm? Light some candles! Illuminate yourself.
~one voice~
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10 posted 08-30-99 08:03 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, this is a beautiful dark side to romance... I like it...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Poet deVine
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11 posted 08-30-99 10:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

If you left off the last two lines, you would have a perfect love poem! With the last two, you have a perfect love poem that's sad!
Alwye
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12 posted 08-30-99 11:09 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

What a twist at the end, Dream...took me by surprise..exellent work, beautifully sad.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Skyfyre
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13 posted 08-30-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Ouch ... dead metaphorically, I hope?

Excellent poem.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


Michael
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14 posted 08-31-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ah,
You got me on this one - didn't see how you could possibly turn this one so sad with just two lines left. A sweet yet sad Sonnet.
Good work.


Michael
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15 posted 12-17-1999 02:07 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Quite a rotation...as the reader is seductively drawn in to these
sweet words of love, then totally
shocked into sadness.  
Well written, as always.
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