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Comtesse de Chamillart
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0 posted 08-30-99 05:46 AM       View Profile for Comtesse de Chamillart   Email Comtesse de Chamillart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Comtesse de Chamillart

Just toss my heart in to the fire.
Burn me at the stake.
It hurts to find that youíre a liar...
Iíve made a mistake.

Just carve my soul in fine pieces.
It could not me hurt more.
Donít lighten me with your thesis.
Let me walk out the door.

Whispered nothings in her ear,
You tell me the same.
Nothing left for me to fear...
No one left to blame.

Wonít ask how you could do this...
Wonít bother with the time.
Just know youíll never have my kiss,
Or the sweetness of my rhyme.


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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~
© Copyright 1999 Comtesse de Chamillart - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 08-30-99 08:14 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Ouch! Hurts.... Welcome to our happy home...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Star Fairy
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2 posted 08-30-99 09:00 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy   Email Star Fairy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy

very nice
Poet deVine
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3 posted 08-30-99 10:22 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Wonderful poem!

Denise
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4 posted 08-30-99 10:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well done! You made me feel the pain.

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Denise
WhtDove
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5 posted 08-30-99 10:58 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What pain! You have done a very well job describing that in your words! Welcome!!!
Comtesse de Chamillart
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6 posted 08-31-99 04:58 AM       View Profile for Comtesse de Chamillart   Email Comtesse de Chamillart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Comtesse de Chamillart

Thank you all... very much!

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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~
caroline
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7 posted 08-31-99 05:59 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Ahhhh Comtesse...you tell him honey!! Great poem!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
 
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