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dying in your kiss.

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amber
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0 posted 08-30-99 03:44 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

was her kiss as beautiful,
as you claim mine are,
did you touch her softly,
beneath hidden stars,
forgetting of my existance?

was it impossible to tell her,
that you could never hurt me,
the love that you promise,
becomes impossible to see,
because tears blurr my vision.

looking in my eyes,
face to face,
pain is written clearly,
and taken its place,
deep within my soul.

you hold me close,
trying to kiss away,
the confusion youve caused,
but the wind starts to play,
the same familar song.

i hear nothing, see nothing,
beyond your eyes, your lips,
and i find myself agian,
dying in your kiss,
because i let you hurt me so.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 08-30-99 04:49 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Oh Amber.. this is such a sickening feeling indeed... I'm so sorry that you had to experience it. Beautifully put in to words though!

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2 posted 08-30-99 11:11 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What a blow-so sorry...you deserve much better...but you did a great job putting it into a poem.

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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3 posted 08-30-99 03:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Amber,
You did a fine job on a sad kiss.
I just wrote of a kiss and I will
put it on board now. *L*
caroline
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4 posted 08-30-99 08:02 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Amber...*hugs*...such pain in your heart, yet such splendor in your pen. Well done.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
amber
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5 posted 08-31-99 01:48 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thanks for all of your comments. i appreciate them deeply. this poem means alot to me, i can still feel the disgust in my stomach everytime i read it. thanks agian for reading.
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6 posted 08-31-99 07:05 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Put the poem away and move on...he's not worth one more second. Be grateful for the pain only because it helped you create such a lovely poem!
amber
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7 posted 08-31-99 04:14 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you very much, ive told myself that so many times, but often i cant force myself to go through with it. sometimes its hard to leave, all youve ever known, even if they break your heart. thank you for your time!
Emmy
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8 posted 08-31-99 08:14 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

So sorry, so sorry... what an awful thing to go through; been down that road before, and it wasn't an easy trip. At least you have pencil and paper to help you vent. Wonderful work.
 
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