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Dark Angel
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0 posted 08-30-99 02:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

You were my love
Your love made me high
It kept me young
And made me wanna fly
Over the great Oceans and Seas
To come and get you

I beleived in love
and in dreams
Now your love had died
and mine is dying
God, how we tried
To keep it going

Oh! how I soared over mountains
and layed upon a cloud
I found wonderful you
I was so proud
To have you in my life
and maybe one day
As my wife

Never did I hear or feel you breathe
To know in reality.....
Your Existance

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-30-99).]
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~one voice~
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1 posted 08-30-99 04:05 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dark Angel... absolutely beautiful... made me sigh, wishing I had a love like that...

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~onevoice~

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like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


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2 posted 08-30-99 12:18 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

once again you have left me speechless.
Dark Angel
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3 posted 08-30-99 04:14 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you One Voice and thank you Miriam for your lovely comments
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4 posted 02-11-2002 06:00 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

awww dark angel, this is breath-taking.
 
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