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Helea
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 15
Canada

0 posted 1999-08-30 12:40 PM



Your Charming Eyes...
By Helea

When I look at your eyes...I see your trueself
I see you’re sweet...and caring...
I see you’re smart...
I see you’re giving and forgiving...
I see your love for me...

When I look at your eyes I stop myself from crying...
When I’m alone and think about your eyes...I cry...
I can’t stop thinking that one day I’ll never see those eyes again...
That I’ll never see the love or the sweetness ...
Or the love that makes who you are...
One day you’ll be gone ...gone from me...
Gone from this world...
No matter what happens those eyes will one day close
And forever rest in peace...

But you’ll never be completely gone...
Because everytime I close my eyes...
There you will be.

© Copyright 1999 Helea - All Rights Reserved
amber
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 240
los banos, ca,
1 posted 1999-08-30 03:48 AM


this is a beautiful poem, it expresses alot of emotion.I have found myself feeling this way before when the love of my life was in a car accident. he barely lived and even though he is okay now i still cry sometimes because i know there will be one day that i will never see him agian. thank you for posting very pretty!
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2 posted 2002-02-11 06:43 PM


awww there is just something about the EYES!!
They are the windows to the soul. very nice

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