Member Rara Avis
America the beautiful
Wow, Denise, I'm so sorry-it must have been so hard on you. I agree that someone who is loved is only physically alone and not any other way. Still, it must have been so hard to have that idea within you. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us. I liked the rhyme and flow-they can only improve a poem. The hospital is described quite well in the first two lines-all right, I'll quit rambling.
"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 08-30-99).]