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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

0 posted 1999-08-29 02:13 PM

I'm lost in thought, again, I see
...Another mem'ry calling me;
I gently slip...into the past
...I'll be right back; I'll be real fast!

I linger there...perhaps too long
But can't you hear that lovely song?
How can I leave before it's done?
That soothing strain has just begun!

What's that you say...it's time to go?
There's work to do...of course...I know
You go ahead...I'll be along;
I need to hear just one more song!

...Another lovely melody
...Another mem'ry calling me!

,

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-08-29 04:47 PM

dsnyder,
Short or long you ring my bell,well done.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-08-29 04:53 PM

Once again, thank you! It sure feels good to be appreciated!

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 1999-08-29 05:13 PM

Appreciated you are! So's your work!!!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-08-29 07:32 PM

Reading your work is thoroughly enjoyable.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-08-29 09:38 PM

Thank you so much WhtDove and Balladeer!

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Denise

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

6 posted 1999-08-29 09:45 PM

Lost in thought, I never, ever want to return to today-I too want to hear "just one more song!" I found this poem to be well written with excellent rhyme and meter.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-08-30 03:35 PM

Why, thank you so much Elizabeth. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

traveler
Member

since 1999-08-17

Posts 119

8 posted 1999-08-30 04:01 PM

Did someone just call? Oh never mind ... you have more posts ... That I need to read ...Thank you DS for the wonderful gifts ...

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 1999-08-30 04:25 PM

Thank you traveler. You have a wonderful sense of humor!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-04-17 02:04 PM

big smile here

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2005-08-23 01:08 AM

Denise, there is not enough of your words to read of late, but at least I know where to find them when I want them

This memory twigger I sure identify with.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2005-08-23 11:22 AM

Denise~

Lovely right from the get go ... always~
Aren't the archives a fun place to find a friend and reflect on their beauty ?
YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL dearest friend~

For those who might not be aware, Denise's home computer is 'sick' ... and she can't access us from her workplace ... but, she is thinking of us~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2005-08-23 10:50 PM

Mind if I linger there too. What a wonderful write. You've been good a long time I see.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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