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I'll Be Along

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Denise
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0 posted 08-29-99 02:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

I'm lost in thought, again, I see
...Another mem'ry calling me;
I gently slip...into the past
...I'll be right back; I'll be real fast!

I linger there...perhaps too long
But can't you hear that lovely song?
How can I leave before it's done?
That soothing strain has just begun!

What's that you say...it's time to go?
There's work to do...of course...I know
You go ahead...I'll be along;
I need to hear just one more song!

...Another lovely melody
...Another mem'ry calling me!

,
© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-29-99 04:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

dsnyder,
Short or long you ring my bell,well done.
Denise
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2 posted 08-29-99 04:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Once again, thank you! It sure feels good to be appreciated!

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Denise
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Appreciated you are! So's your work!!!
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4 posted 08-29-99 07:32 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Reading your work is thoroughly enjoyable.
Denise
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5 posted 08-29-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you so much WhtDove and Balladeer!

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Denise
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6 posted 08-29-99 09:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Lost in thought, I never, ever want to return to today-I too want to hear "just one more song!" I found this poem to be well written with excellent rhyme and meter.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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7 posted 08-30-99 03:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Why, thank you so much Elizabeth. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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8 posted 08-30-99 04:01 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Did someone just call? Oh never mind ... you have more posts ... That I need to read ...Thank you DS for the wonderful gifts ...
Denise
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9 posted 08-30-99 04:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you traveler. You have a wonderful sense of humor!
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big smile here
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11 posted 08-23-2005 01:08 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Denise, there is not enough of your words to read of late, but at least I know where to find them when I want them   This memory twigger I sure identify with.
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12 posted 08-23-2005 11:22 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise~

Lovely right from the get go ... always~
Aren't the archives a fun place to find a friend and reflect on their beauty ?
YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL dearest friend~

For those who might not be aware, Denise's home computer is 'sick' ... and she can't access us from her workplace ... but, she is thinking of us~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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13 posted 08-23-2005 10:50 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Mind if I linger there too. What a wonderful write. You've been good a long time I see.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

 
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