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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 08-29-99 12:49 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

The warmth of your breath still caresses my skin.
Your tender touch lingers within my blissful soul.
With an honest, loving look you've pulled me in.
Our fire is eternal, everlasting, this I know.

Your tender touch lingers within my blissful soul.
Hand in hand we shall softly tread the infinite skies.
Our fire is eternal, everlasting, this I know.
I am dancing upon the breeze as tears of joy I cry.

Hand in hand we shall softly tread the infinite skies.
Softly enfolded within your arms is where I belong.
I am dancing upon the breeze as tears of joy I cry.
Harmonious chords quietly sound love's enraptured song.

Softly enfolded within your arms is where I belong.
Within a sparkling, dreamy haze my drifting mind dwells.
Harmonious chords quietly sound love's enraptured song.
Consumed with overpowering emotion, my heart swells.

Within a sparkling, dreamy haze my drifting mind dwells.
I ache in anticipation for the moment our lips touch.
Consumed with overpowering emotion, my heart swells.
Until now, I didn't realize I could love this much.

I ache in anticipation for the moment our lips touch.
With an honest, loving look you've pulled me in.
Until now, I didn't realize I could love this much.
The warmth of your breath still caresses my skin.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 08-29-99 09:10 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hey Alwye..... another pantoum, I see....
You've got your repetitions down pretty well.. Let's work on your meter next - Geesh - such great work from a young poet...
Dark Angel
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Alwye.....Beautiful!!!
Pepper
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absolutely love this....I can feel this. Thank you for putting these feelings into words with your' wonderful talent.
Balladeer
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4 posted 08-29-99 02:50 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It was a real pleasure reading this.
Alwye
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Thank you all.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


 
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