Why thank you, WhtDove. The only pointers I can give are to just write down what you are feeling and then revise, revise, revise until you have the right flow and feeling that you are aiming for. Also, I read somewhere to use as many descriptive words as possible! That's all I know. But I never studied poetry or literature. I'm sure there are others who could help you alot more! Thanks again! By the way your work is very good too!
[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 08-30-99).]