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caroline
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0 posted 08-28-99 10:31 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline


Time takes its toll within distance
Mars the path to least resistance
The road becomes long
and not quite as strong
as when the journey began

Along with each obstruction
comes a little more destruction
When communication fails
The road becomes a trail
overgrown with weeds and thorns

We must cross over the gap
Even redraw the map
Take on a new direction
toward the intersection
where we stand face to face

Now we've bridged the miles
we see each other smile
Time and distance disappear
through sweat, blood and tears
This love is worth it all

caroline
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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-28-99 11:34 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I agree-love is worth anything, Caroline. I also like your signature quote.

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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We've a sagacious poet amongst us...
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Caroline,
Sagacious and gracious.
Nice job.
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Very nice. This piece captures the truth of any relationship which is a lasting one.>>
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5 posted 08-30-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

My thanks to all of you. I humbly bow in the presence of such talent as yours.

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awesome piece!
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