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Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 1999-08-28 10:01 PM

From Dusk to Dawn

Soft voice, anguished eyes
Pleasant smile, but it lies.

Emotions locked deep inside,
I can see the pain you hide.

I pray for strength to find the key:
To be the one who sets you free.

I need the words to reach your soul.
Feel my love, it can make you whole.

There’s no need to keep it in.
I see the tears you hide within.

Get it out, let them flow
Only then will peace you know.

Let me assist you with this task.
I’ll help you remove your mask.

It hides a face I love so well
Come out of hiding, leave your hell.

Soon the twilight will be gone.
It’s always darkest before the dawn.

Step with me into the light.
Bring the day into your night.

Feel the warmth of the rising sun
Be at peace, you have won.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-28 10:11 PM

I very much wish for the peace you describe. 'Twould truly be a pleasure to feel such.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-08-28 10:36 PM

This flowed really well! Very GOOD!!!! I loved the message, actually everything about it!

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-08-28 10:41 PM

Wow, nice flow, wonderful message! I enjoyed this a lot!!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

4 posted 1999-08-28 10:51 PM

Thank you all for your comments. :-)

startin_fresh
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 137
US

5 posted 1999-08-29 12:36 PM

Great work my friend. You have a gift. I always look forward to your next poem. Congrats on the "member" status. :>)

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 1999-08-29 04:50 AM

Beautiful poem, Tara.
Reaches deep into the soul.

Michael

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 1999-08-29 05:44 AM

I really felt the love in this poem, This is beautiful Tara.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

8 posted 1999-08-29 11:50 AM

The flow and rhyme are excellent! It's a wonderful poem to someone you really care about (stating the obvious here) and I really liked it! Thanks Tara!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 1999-08-29 03:26 PM

Very beautiful poem, Tara. I enjoyed this very much. I could feel the emotion.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

10 posted 1999-08-29 05:42 PM

yes,very deep emotion shared here!I enjoyed this very much too.

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

11 posted 1999-08-29 06:06 PM

BEAUTIFUL..Tara..

Thanks for sharing it with us..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

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