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From Dusk to Dawn

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Tara Simms
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0 posted 08-28-99 10:01 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

From Dusk to Dawn

Soft voice, anguished eyes
Pleasant smile, but it lies.

Emotions locked deep inside,
I can see the pain you hide.

I pray for strength to find the key:
To be the one who sets you free.

I need the words to reach your soul.
Feel my love, it can make you whole.

Thereís no need to keep it in.
I see the tears you hide within.

Get it out, let them flow
Only then will peace you know.

Let me assist you with this task.
Iíll help you remove your mask.

It hides a face I love so well
Come out of hiding, leave your hell.

Soon the twilight will be gone.
Itís always darkest before the dawn.

Step with me into the light.
Bring the day into your night.

Feel the warmth of the rising sun
Be at peace, you have won.

© Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-28-99 10:11 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I very much wish for the peace you describe. 'Twould truly be a pleasure to feel such.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


WhtDove
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2 posted 08-28-99 10:36 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This flowed really well! Very GOOD!!!! I loved the message, actually everything about it!
Alwye
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3 posted 08-28-99 10:41 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, nice flow, wonderful message! I enjoyed this a lot!!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Tara Simms
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4 posted 08-28-99 10:51 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Thank you all for your comments. :-)
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5 posted 08-29-99 12:36 AM       View Profile for startin_fresh   Email startin_fresh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for startin_fresh

Great work my friend. You have a gift. I always look forward to your next poem. Congrats on the "member" status. :>)
Michael
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6 posted 08-29-99 04:50 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful poem, Tara.
Reaches deep into the soul.


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7 posted 08-29-99 05:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I really felt the love in this poem, This is beautiful Tara.
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8 posted 08-29-99 11:50 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

The flow and rhyme are excellent! It's a wonderful poem to someone you really care about (stating the obvious here) and I really liked it! Thanks Tara!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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9 posted 08-29-99 03:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful poem, Tara. I enjoyed this very much. I could feel the emotion.
Pepper
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10 posted 08-29-99 05:42 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

yes,very deep emotion shared here!I enjoyed this very much too.
moonmoon
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BEAUTIFUL..Tara..

Thanks for sharing it with us..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


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