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Let's Fly

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Denise
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0 posted 08-28-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

Let's traipse among the stars tonight
Come dance with me 'till dawn's new light
Let's waltz as one beneath the moon
-Come hastily - for dawn wakes soon.

Come sing a song with me, my Love
Pure harmony to rise above
The deaf'ning din that sure abounds
-'Till we but hear love's sweeter sounds.

Let's fly together you and I
Above the clouds - let's soar so high
Transcending mountain peaks - each one
-'Till twilight's nigh and day is done.

Come dance with me, Beloved, do
From this day on - 'till time is through
Let's soar above life's raging shore
-And sing love's sweet song - evermore.


© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-29-99 08:46 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Ah yes..... a poem about love.....
which just happens to be written in flawless iambic tetrameter with a perfect rhyme scheme.... 'Tis simply perfect..


[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-29-99).]
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2 posted 08-29-99 12:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Nan. I appreciate your comments!
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3 posted 08-29-99 02:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

dsnyder,
I agree with Nan, you did a good job, enjoyed the poem.
Denise
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4 posted 08-29-99 03:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you very much Seymour, I'm glad you liked it!
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5 posted 08-29-99 09:47 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Nan is right! It's beautiful. Your work is wonderful, d.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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Thank you Elizabeth, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Denise
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Another in agreement with Nan. Sounds so romantic, oooh! just beautiful!!!!
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8 posted 08-30-99 03:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks again WhtDove. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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Denise
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perfection! I REALLY love this!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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Why thank you caroline. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Please do me a favor. Just take the phrase TRULY EXCELLENT and cut and paste as my reply to everything you do, ok?
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Wow, a truly beautiful love poem, dsnyder..wonderful work!!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


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13 posted 08-31-99 11:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Balladeer and Alwye thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment. It is appreciated.
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oh yes...lets!
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15 posted 03-07-2006 07:29 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Sounds like a good idea to me.....

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

 
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