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a rainbow to brighten every day....

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 08-28-99 07:25 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I want you
but you're not here
I need you
but you're not near
I see you
in every single place
in every private thought
that I have ever shared
you're with your family now
and that is where you'll stay
but with all my love
I'll wish you
a rainbow
to brighten every day....


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-28-99).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 08-28-99 11:12 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was so sweet! A rainbow to brighten every day...awe! Loved readin it!
Alwye
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2 posted 08-28-99 11:18 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Whtdove is right, very sweet!!! Lovely!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Pepper
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yes...it is lovely
Robin
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4 posted 08-29-99 04:28 PM       View Profile for Robin   Email Robin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robin

Yes, I like this too. You can really feel the desperation and confusion. And to finish it with such a positive thought is excellent.

Robin
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5 posted 08-29-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for writer51   Email writer51   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for writer51

I liked the passion and force that was evident when reading this well written poem.
Poet deVine
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Excellent! I like the poem and have been in this situation unfortunately.
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 08-29-99 06:12 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks all..:-)) Memory lane ...*sigh*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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Sweet & touchy Rainbow...Loved it..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


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Living up to your name awesomely!
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Hits home

Nice poem, RainbowGirl, and it's nice to see the rainbow in it
RainbowGirl
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Thank you...he'll never know though, just as he'll never know the little black dress was written for him...but loving someone is such a miracle that even when shrouded in sadness I smile at the beauty of something so magical that touches me so deeply yet so quietly...

HUGS all


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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